[Minor Edit] Update Description for Server

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  1. Rekindled
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    Now. that this server is number 1(yay!) I think we should update the description. There are times when I've seen the server over 1000 players online concurrently. Because more people will be reading the description it helps to entice them with a larger player base and therefore attracting more people. Thanks for your time.
    " With an average online player count of around 300, and seeing as many as 700 online simultaneously, we are the most popular nostalgic server around, and there are always people for you to hang out with!" to 600;1000

    Also, @ any grammar fanatic: Admittedly, I may not be bright, but I find that this wording is awkward. Anyone have suggestion to improve this sentence, or am I delusional? If so, I will retract my statement and this post can be deleted. I mean NO offense to the person(s) who wrote the description; after all, it may even be correct.
    "There are no miracle scrolls and will never be!" should be revised to one of the following, whilst conveying the same tone:

    - "There are no miracle scrolls, and there will never be!"
    - "There are no miracle scrolls nor will there ever be!"

    If you have the time to respond, please do, if not you can just ignore this.
    I really hope I didn't waste your time; I only wanted this to benefit the server.
     
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    I've never understood the miracle scroll thing. There are potential scrolls, but miracle scrolls aren't even a thing. Potential scrolls are just something that is used with cubes. I think a better item to put in there would be enhancement scrolls. Basically, the miracle scroll thing is redundant after saying there are no cubes.

    None of this really matter. It just kind of bugged me for w/e reason:p
     
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    Just to confirm, are you talking about the server description on http://gtop100.com/ ? If so, then yeah it needs to be updated. I don't think it's been touched since the server started. I actually spoke about updating the gtop100 description with a member of staff quite recently.
     
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    Yes, that's the one, sorry I wasn't more clear. Yea, I tink that would be best to do. I hope this server continues to grow like it is.

    http://www.gtop100.com/topsites/MapleStory/sitedetails/MapleRoyals-Nostalgic-MapleStory-Server-79510

    Some glaring typos ^^
    More things:
    Line # 6 Under Notable Features:
    Super Megaphones also drop from most monsters to encourage a social environment. =>Remove or change

    Line # 10 Under Notable Features:
    Upgrade Maple Shields to level 73 type ones. => level 64 ones.
     
    Last edited: Jan 18, 2016

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