I tried to make a trap instrumental

Any thoughts? It's not as great as what you commercially hear ofcourse. Infact it's not even mastered. I'm just doing crap n uploading crap.
E.G. any thoughts on the hi hats? Or something?

Also I'm whoring out myself coz I've got some stuff in the near future coming up so drop a follow!

Think it's alright so far?

Let me know.

 

Yes sonnn, feeling some heat on this!

Let me get busy with a snare and a kick!

 

This is pretty solid for being unmastered tbh, It has a story telling vibe to it in my eyes, but SOMETHING is missing for it to sound properly trap, may be a better product with snares & kicks as da person above said? I unno

But it has a good vibe to it for sure, nice bro

 

Thanks bruh!

And yea it feels a bit off but I'm working on making a better sound I also think mastering it will make it sound beefier ;p Thanks tho guys